A short

topic posted Wed, March 31, 2004 - 6:22 AM by  Jenn a-k-a G...

The hollow pain that you laid
inside of my soul, doesn't hurt anymore.
My struggle is over.

You're years in my life take no effect,
I am no longer a wheck. My struggle is over.
I am not yours anymore.
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Jenn a-k-a Goldie
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    Re: A short

    Wed, March 31, 2004 - 8:59 AM
    Jenn, didn't that feel good? Finally, to be able to say those words must have really set you free.

    Ernest Hemmingway once said, "Write long and hard about what hurts."

    I found that the more I write when in pain, the more I can get my feelings straight after they have been walked on and left outside the door for the rain, wind and sun to destroy.

    Bren
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