poem

topic posted Tue, March 2, 2004 - 2:12 PM by  Bren-Duh
SEE YOU IN MY DREAMS

Days come and days go
Night linger way too slow
Aching inside just to feel your touch
Wanting you in my arms too much
Needing the essence of you
But darling I have no clue
As to why you make me wait
When all it would take
Is just a little bit of your time
Seems the answer is clear
You don’t need me
Just a itch to scratch
Is all I am to you
You have your pets to play with
And a bags full of toys
I would just another body
To warm in the night
Why then?
Another body to conquer
Another woman to bring you life
So self assured you seem to be
Yet the day haunts you
And the night brings no relief
Alone with a need to fill
Only for a moment will you allow
A small joy to invade
Back to the dreary routine of being alone
I could feel a big need if only
You could see past you addiction
To the lust of life’s pleasures
And the meaningless relationships
Goodbye baby see you in my dreams
posted by:
Bren-Duh
Alabama
  • Re: poem

    Tue, March 2, 2004 - 10:43 PM
    I just wanted to cry, reading this.
    • Re: poem

      Mon, March 8, 2004 - 6:42 PM
      Thanks dear friend. I read it again after you made that remark. I suppose it is a bit of a tear jerker but I didn't notice as I write straight from the heart and close the page.

      You might want to cry again so here goes.
      I wrote this 12 years after the love of my life died of a sudden heart attack. He will linger in my mind and heart until the day I die. Our relationship lasted over seven years.

      GONE FROM MY LIFE; NOT MY HEART

      Gone is he from this earth
      Never to be see again
      Heard again
      Touched again
      Looked upon again
      But he will always linger
      In my heart

      The days were short
      Without us knowing
      We laughed and cried
      Fought and made up
      Made love in the still of the night
      And slept without dreams
      Until daylight would break

      We loved with a passion
      Unknown by many
      Kissed under the light of the moon
      Hugged at each entrance
      Hugged again at each parting
      Always happy to see the face
      Of the other in sight

      Those years were few
      And only now do I know that
      But in my heart
      Those years will always
      Be with me
      For I loved him so
      And that love will never die.
      • Re: poem

        Mon, March 8, 2004 - 7:54 PM
        Sorry for your loss. Sounds like a wonderful relationship you 2 shared.
        • Re: poem

          Mon, March 8, 2004 - 8:13 PM
          You know as all relationships go, it had its ups and downs but he was the one man in this world that I loved with all my heart and I knew that the feeling was mutual. I will miss him forever but the pain has been replaced with a warm feeling that I once knew and loved him.

          Thanks for your kind words.
          Bren

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